' THE LONGEST NIGHT '
THE WAR IN EUROPE HAS REACHED CRITICAL MASS AND
IT IS A RACE BETWEEN THE RED ARMY AND THE NEWLY
ARRIVED US AND CANADIAN 4TH CORPS.
JUST ONE LAST PUSH IS REQUIRED TO CLEAR AWAY
SACEUR'S GAMBIT AND THE LAST DIVISION STANDING
BETWEEN THE RED ARMY AND THE CHANNEL PORTS.
IT IS THE LONGEST NIGHT FOR EVERYONE, AND THE LAST
NIGHT FOR MANY.
' CROSSING THE RUBICON '
THE EUROPEAN WAR IS A LONG WAY FROM THE FIGHTING
THAT IS CONSUMING THE PACIFIC. THE ANZACS AND THE
US 5TH MECHANISED DIVISION ARE NOT ENOUGH TO DEFEND
AUSTRALIA'S COASTLINE ALONE, BUT FEAR OF CHINA'S NUCLEAR
ARSENAL HAS LEFT THE ALLIES WITH FEW FRIENDS AND
ALL IS NOT WELL AT HOME IN THE WEST.
A RECKONING IS COMING.
Sunday, 11 May 2014
Saturday, 3 May 2014
Sunday, 20 April 2014
Striving for a unique style
When I decided to create maps to enhance my storytelling I tried several different styles, none of them particularly original, until I decided that as my signature style of writing is one of descriptive detail then the maps should be also. I was definitely not going to hand draw a crude map and scan it, and I was not happy with tracing existing maps and scanning them either. I wanted not too much detail so as to bury the message, but enough to engage the readers imagination.
My artistic interpretation of the Macquarie Pass*, one of the land routes to Canberra, up the prehistoric sea cliffs of the Mt Kembla escarpment in New South Wales, is hand drawn digitally using a mouse and Paint Shop Pro version 1 (It may be inferior to Paint Shop Pro 8, but I am familiar with it.) Unlike the maps of imaginary 'Vormundberg' in Germany or real life Moruya, further south along the NSW coast, the Macquarie maps are at a slightly oblique angle as I wanted to avoid using contour lines to emphasise hills on otherwise 'flat' maps. You will of course notice that the maps detail of the ground does not faithfully mirror that of the real area but instead it compliments the story as I saw it unfold in my head.
The file size problem which I described in earlier posts brought some priceless help from Adrian Robinson with regard to image compression whilst retaining quality, and now Poofy Koshi (a nom de plume) on a source of high definition but low byte size map symbols, for which I am truly grateful also.
* Code for - Not to Scale :)
Friday, 4 April 2014
The pains of eBook illustrating.
I would like to say that I was shocked to see CreateSpace double the price of a very small booklet I produced as a companion for my book series, but unfortunately nothing they do comes as a surprise anymore.
I added four maps, all digitally created and together they increased the books total file size by a mere 800kb. This was enough to have the price leap up from $3.59 to $7.79.
Fortunately, I have not found that problem with Kindle, not yet anyway.
As to the eBooks, the trick is to produce a jpg picture, 800 pixiels x 600 pixels and of a file size below 250kb. The resolution is the problem as too low will result in a fuzzy image, and HD gives a huge file size. Keep the resolution at 300 PSI and that should do the trick.
Thanks again to Adrian Robinson for guiding me to the simple to use Microsoft Office image manager to achieve that!
And of course an excerpt to go with it.
89,030 words down....
I added four maps, all digitally created and together they increased the books total file size by a mere 800kb. This was enough to have the price leap up from $3.59 to $7.79.
Fortunately, I have not found that problem with Kindle, not yet anyway.
As to the eBooks, the trick is to produce a jpg picture, 800 pixiels x 600 pixels and of a file size below 250kb. The resolution is the problem as too low will result in a fuzzy image, and HD gives a huge file size. Keep the resolution at 300 PSI and that should do the trick.
Thanks again to Adrian Robinson for guiding me to the simple to use Microsoft Office image manager to achieve that!
The aerial photo of the area where the action takes place, in the book.
reproduced by hand as a digital map
Standard military unit symbols representative of the story
Remembering of course to 'box' the enemy forces symbols so that they may still be discerned as such on black and white eReaders.
89,030 words down....
‘Tango Four Three Charlie’, a German built Leopard 1 that was older than even the old man of the crew, Trooper ‘Bingo’ McCoy, the twenty eight year old driver, rocked on its tracks as a shell exploded in the trees nearby. The vicious splinters were little threat to the tank, but a deadly danger to the infantry who shared this ordeal by fire.
The Australians had decided on replacing the old main battle tanks with American M1A1 Abrams, but the war had occurred before that process had begun.
“This is just a diversion.” opined the tanks gunner, Che Tan, and not for the first time.
They were in a hull down position well to the rear of their fighting positions, beyond the boundary of Moruya Jockey Club, the race track north of the river of the same name. Che was Australian born and bred; his parents though had arrived as refugees from Vietnam. There was nothing inscrutably oriental about Trooper Tan; he said it as he saw it.
“They’ll get bored and bugger off in a minute.”
A near miss shook the vehicle, red hot steel splinters striking its armour.
The rest of the crew in the turret stared accusingly at the gunner for tempting fate.
“A minute?” asked the driver. “I’ve got five dollars if someone’s got a stopwatch and better odds.”
They were three quarters of a miles from the beach, and from their forward fighting positions among two platoons worth of the Royal New South Wales Regiment, along with a pair of ASLAV armoured recce vehicles of the 2nd/14th Light Horse. The racetrack, a coastal road, a copse and an airfield runway lay between their current position and where they would fight.
Either side of C Troop’s current location were the company headquarters of the infantry, occupying a dug-in CP, mortar pits and trenches. The infantrymen had no armoured fighting vehicles; just canvas topped Mercedes Unimogs in a harbour area further to the rear. The clerks and storemen huddled in the shelter bays praying that no direct hit would end them instantly, and no near-miss would collapse the trench upon them and end them slowly.
“Seriously though.” Che said. “What are we doing here? It’s not tank country; there are rivers and billabongs all over the shop, and enough trees per acre to make a billion matchsticks.”
“Colour, dash and daring, boy.” Chuck said. “Colour, dash and daring. Without us this would just be another mindless shitfight between their moron grunts and our cut-lunch-commandos” as he referred to volunteer reservists.
The tanks crews had made good use of the aforementioned trees, cutting branches and foliage to strap to the turret and flanks with D10 telephone cable. By doing so they spared their cam nets and also took their cover with them whenever they moved.
“Hello all Tango callsigns, this is Tango Four Three Alpha, ‘Wicked Lady’, over.”
“Tango Four Three Bravo, ‘Wicked Lady’, over!”
“Tango Four Three Charlie, ‘Wicked Lady’ over!” Gary Burley, the tanks commander replied.
“Tango Four Three Alpha, ‘Wicked Lady’, out.”
Sergeant Burley switched to intercom.
“Okay Bingo, let’s go, get us to the first firing position, the landing craft have been spotted heading in!”
A hundred metres spacing between the vehicles, they moved slowly forwards at first like articulated garden features, leafy branches seemingly growing out of the steel plate. They maneuvered around trees until reaching the chain link fence surrounding the race track and accelerated hard. Four Three Charlies’s driver ignored an open gate in order the trash a long length of the fence which they carried with them, entangled over the front of the Leopard.
“Well that was smart, wasn't it?” Gary said to the driver in censure.
“Bollocks, the amount of money I've lost in this place I reckon I must have paid for it twice over.” Bingo grumbled back. He had picked up his nickname because he was so addicted to giving away his cash to bookies after each Army Appreciation Day (Payday, in Anzac parlance), he had even been spotted sat among blue rinsed old ladies in Bingo Halls trying to win it back before his wife found out.
The Leopards were illuminated by the blazing spectator’s stands and stables. The horses, and much of the local population, had moved away over the previous week when it became evident that invasion was inevitable.
“Bloody hell, if you spent enough here to qualify as an owner then I reckon yer about bankrupt now, mate!”
The racecourse had received the attention of naval gunfire, as had the small provincial airport, where flames were leaping high from the hangars and buildings, clearly visible above the trees to their right.
The damage wrought to the fence seemed rather trivial in the face of what the invaders were doing. When Banjo repeated it at the other side it became snarled up with the first one they had crashed through, leaving the fence raising sparks as it trailed behind them across George Bass Drive, the coastal road.
Saturday, 8 March 2014
Setting the scene
The setting for the final battle between NATO and the Red Army in Europe is a fictitious hill and valley in Germany called The Vormundberg. Believe it or not, this is twelve hours work. I could easily have written 4000 words in the same period of time.
Ah well, onwards and upwards.......
Friday, 21 February 2014
A thousand words worth?
A picture paints a thousand words and adding maps can add to the readers enjoyment.
Map makers though do not come cheap and using anything on the web is likely to have a copyright.
The solution is to make your own.
As horses are for courses, so too are maps with regard to style.
Keep it simple, keep it basic and do not go overboard with the amount of information to put on it, have it relate to events in your story.
I started from scratch at 8am this morning. The representation of a tree was over an hours work and I need a lot of them so patch and paste got a little humdrum by lunchtime.
I picked an area I knew in Lower Saxony but my map bears little in relation to reality.
The symbols were fiddly too but now I have created them the next maps with be easier.
This was the landscape before place names were added, and the second frame adds these and the third frame is the calm before the storm. I think I will need six maps or segments of the maps to accompany the story of a battle from start to finish.
It is actually not as hard as you may think, just time consuming at first.
In no time at all I was being messaged by a Norwegian gentleman who observed that the symbol colours were incorrect. He is right of course and that highlights the need for accuracy in all things non-SF or suffer the slings and arrows of outraged experts as a consequence.
So Alton, just for you mate, and thank you for the nudge.
Thursday, 6 February 2014
Sample - Volume 4
For those most worthy individuals who served in the Wessex Regiment TAVR:
CHAPTER 1
Vormundberg: 2111hrs.
If not for the burning
vehicles in the valley it would be as dark as a grave on the hillside, but
silent it was not.
“AMMO!”
The cry came from the gun
controller of a GPMG in the sustained fire role and its gun crew from ‘C’
(Royal Berkshire) Company, 2 Wessex, were firing on a DF he could not even see
had it been daylight.
The GPMG was almost at
its maximum elevation as fired twenty round bursts, with every fifth one being
a tracer round to aid correction. The rounds arced away into the night but not
to a pre-registered Defensive Fire in front of their own positions, they were
disappearing over a protrusion of higher ground to their right to plunge down
at a target 1700 metres away.
The gun pit was not situated
for direct defence but instead to provide enfilade fire support for other
companies or units on the flanks. The GPMG was particularly well suited for
this as the ‘beaten zone’, the pattern in which the rounds from a burst of fire
landed, was cigar shaped and therefore more effective when employed against
advancing infantry.
Likewise the companies
and units on either flank would fire on their neighbours DFs.
Its sight was the C2, the
same as that used on the L16 81mm mortar, and similarly used in conjunction
with an aiming post to register targets they may not even have direct line of
sight to, and to lay onto those targets again at any time, come day or night
although a Trilux lamp was clamped to the top of the aiming post for night
shoots.
Once the fall of shot was
landing where it was required then the bearing and elevation was recorded. In
this fashion a good crew could unlock the guns swivel mount, swing it onto the
desired bearing where after a little fine adjustment they could put rounds on
the ground in exactly the same place, very rapidly.
If it was necessary to
engage targets to their front, the gun was dismounted from the tripod and used
in the light role over open sights as the tripod was below ground level.
Some twenty three DFs
were registered carefully in waterproof chinagraph pen along with three FPFs,
Final Protective Fires, that would be called in in the event of units coming
into close quarters with enemy infantry.
Thus far they had fired
on those FPFs some eleven times this day, and the day wasn’t over yet.
In a trench to their rear
a young soldier slung his rifle across his back and squatted to grip the metal
handles of two ammunition boxes from a stash left by the CQMS. The yellow
stencilling identified the contents as 7.62 link and the boxes were heavy, the
handles slippery with mud and he used the remaining boxes as steps to exit.
“NO…crawl!” shouted the
gun controller before flinching at the sound of a high velocity round, its
sharp crack hurting his ears as it passed by at a velocity exceeded the speed
of sound.
“Ah, bollocks!” Lance
Corporal ‘Dopey’ Hemp snarled with feeling, tearing his eyes away before
turning to the gun’s No. 2, yelling into his ear.
“Back in a jiffy Spider, but
get ready to throw smoke when I shout?.”
“I’ve only got the one.”
Dopey checked his pouches,
but he had only L2 fragmentation grenades, the Brit version of the US M26.
“Bugger it…” Roger was
busy doing his gunner bit so Dopey checked his pouches for him, and he was out
of smoke too. He would have to use a wet and muddy route back to the trench
behind them and save the smoke for the return journey.
“Where’d the shot come
from?” Spider asked.
Dopey nodded downslope
where Soviet AFVs and tanks sat disabled or burnt-out in mud that grew deeper
with each new attack’s churning sets of tracks.
“The smart money says he…or
they, will be five hundred odd metres away in amongst that lot down there.”
Downslope beyond their
own units positions was known as the Thin Green Line, the ground held by the
Royal Marines of 44 Commando who had allowed a group of enemy tanks and AFVs to
roll over their forward trenches before engaging them where their armour was
thinnest and knocking them out with infantry anti-tank weapons.
The NATO forces best tank
killers were still the guns of their own MBTs, but attrition was at work there
too on this seemingly endless day and night.
Clearly not all the enemy
who had reached the defenders on the Vormundberg were dead as two members of D
Company, 2LI, at whose rear the gun pit sat, had also fallen victim in the past
hour.
Private ‘Spider’ Webber
did not stick his head up to look; he had learned that lesson early on.
“I wonder what the Argyll
and Sutherland guys will call us when we are the forward line of troops?”
“Same as always, I
expect…” replied Dopey, stripping off his bulky fighting order and adding with
his best attempt at a Glasgow accent “…yon
fockin’ wee Eng-lish bast-ads.”
Spider checked the wind
direction and decided he would have to toss the smoke to the right front of the
gun pit, and not too far either as damp air made the smoke ‘hang’ in the rain
rather than drift with the breeze.
Unburdened by the webbing
Dopey slipped over the lip of the gun pit, keeping as low as possible he snaked
through the mud into a depression carved out by this constant rain. He couldn’t
remember when he had last been dry and neither could he recall when last he had
last felt safe. He followed the depression on his belly for twenty metres up
the slope.
Bracing himself,
swallowing down the fear and forcing it away he left the depression with a dive
and roll, and the lance corporal kept on rolling until he reach the other
trench, dropping over the edge and back into cover.
He landed on a pair of
legs, but the owner did not object, he lay where he had toppled backwards over
the trench’s lip.
Dead eyes which had been
alive but a few minutes before now stared back. The soldiers face was in shadow
until illuminated briefly by a Soviet parachute flares sulphurous light and
Dopey saw it held a look of surprise. He checked for a pulse anyway and it
confirmed what he had learned to judge by sight, the difference from the living
and the dead, so he wrested the ammunition boxes away from the body. Crouching
below the edge of the trench he braced himself before heaving each one up and
over, lofting not only those boxes but the six remaining boxes of link cached
there.
There were also two boxes
of 7.62 ball ammunition which could be belted together with the growing pile of
expended links below their GPMG. One at a time he tossed these over the lip of
the trench toward his own gun’s position. His arm and back ached with the
effort.
The small arms fire from
the both his 2LI hosts and 44 Commando rose to a crescendo seemingly at the
very second he opened his mouth to call to Spider, and he froze.
Streams of tracer, almost
akin to lasers, ripped through the air high overhead as the marine’s called in
defensive fires.
Gradually the angles of
the outgoing tracer altered, engaging DFs closer to the marine’s positions
before again dropping plunging fire onto a FPF as the Hungarians closed almost
to grenade range.
Mortar fire missions
arrived on target and overhead the outgoing artillery rounds droned mournfully
eastwards, the sound punctuated by those of Challenger and Chieftain’s main
guns deliberate fire.
Dopey’s heart pounded and
it would have been so very easy to just stay where he was, put his shaking
hands over his ears and resign to fear, but the firing slackened from that of a
deafening roar to one of a few desultory shots in the dark.
At times like this the
good soldier does not grit his teeth and fight on for Queen and country, he
does not risk his skin out of regimental pride either, what he does do though
is to think of his mates and it is that spurs him out of safety and back into
harm’s way.
“SPIDER!” he waited for
an answering shout.
“SMOKE!” Dopey yelled.
There was a pause until
Spider judged that line of sight between the trench and the suspected firing
point was sufficient.
“GO!”
Perhaps the sniper was
now dead? But if not he was unlikely to have moved on as his last victim had
emerged from this trench carrying ammunition boxes, so it was a potentially
good source of targets.
Dopey did not leave the
trench the way he came in, he left the far end
and rolled again, pausing only to check that the smoke was where it
should be before slithering quickly downhill to where the boxes had landed.
The smoke was thinning
out by the time he had tossed the last one the remainder of the way to the gun
pit and rejoined the rest of the crew.
They were none of them
regular soldiers, although Dopey Hemp had served a tour attached to The Queens Regiment
in Iraq. They were all three of them part timers from Britain’s Territorial
Army, a diverse mix in terms of background, education and employment in their
day jobs, far more so than amongst the ranks of the regular army. ‘Dopey’s’ given name was Mark and he was a
barman by trade, pulling pints in a pub in Dedworth on the outskirts of
Windsor. He didn’t know what Spider Webber’s Christian name was, but Spider was
a machinist somewhere on Slough Trading Estate. The gunner was Roger Andrews,
an apprentice butcher from Eton Wick and young man lying dead in the trench
behind them had been a college student in Maidenhead.
Dopey and the others from
2 Wessex who were on loan to the Light Infantry were filling dead men’s shoes,
and in their case manning one of the 2LI Machine Gun Platoon ‘gimpies’, the L7A2
General Purpose Machine Guns.
The carefully recorded
bearing and elevation sight settings were not written in Dopey’s hand and they
did not ask what had happened to the light infantrymen who had been the original crew, the sandbags
lining the gun pit were torn and ripped in places from an air bursting
artillery round’s shrapnel, but the rain had washed away the blood.
Now back in the gun pit
the barrel of the GPMG glowed red, the rain hissed and sizzled on the metal but
the fire mission in support of 1CG’s left flank company was complete.
It is possible for the
barrel of a GPMG to become white hot with constant use, and with that the
barrel will warp and become unusable, but before that occurs then rounds will
cook-off in the breach due to the heat. Three spare heavy barrels are part of
an SF kit and carried in a thick wove bag of ’37 Pattern webbing, and it is but
the work of a moment to replace a barrel that is glowing red orange with that
of a spare.
According to the SASC,
the Small Arms School Corps, the hot barrel should be placed to one side and
allowed to cool naturally in order to prevent the metal eventually becoming brittle.
But at one side of the gun pit stood a 16” high aluminium storage tin that had
once held twelve shermouli para illum tubes, it was now brimming with rainwater
and had two heavy barrels for the ’gimpy’ sticking out of it. Had it not been
raining and the locale arid, then the tin would have been filled with the
crew’s urine and the pungent odour of a public urinal on a hot summer’s day
would have hung in the air.
A wonderful tool is a
soldier’s urine, it has softened boot leather for centuries and cooled barrels
since the invention of gunpowder.
In a cramped shelter bay
dug into the side of the gun pit Roger was working on the third barrel with a
wire brush from the weapons cleaning kit, also a webbing bag. Carbon builds up
rapidly in the SF role and if unchecked it will adversely effect accuracy as it
fills the rifling grooves. The barrels
gas regulator also collects carbon residue each time a round is fire and this eventually
leads to stoppages.
Having once cleaned the
inside of the barrel Roger removed the gas regulator and carefully placed this,
along with its two small semi-circular lugs into an old compo ration tin. He
dropped them into two inches of clear fluid that was already in the tin where
they fizzed. If the SASC frowned up the method of cooling the barrels that the Berkshire
men employed, then they would be seriously upset with the regulator being
immersed in rust remover. Nothing, however, removed carbon quite as quickly and
thoroughly as an acid solution. The gunner was far more concerned with
husbanding his limited supply of Jenolite than he was of the SASC’s wrath.
The position had a field
telephone with a direct line to a man-portable telephone exchange at company
headquarters and he reported the death of their ammunition carrier to the D
Company 2LI CSM.
“What was his full name?” the CSM asked.
“I dunno sir, his surname
was Crowne.” Dopey replied, pausing to look at the other two, almost
indiscernible in the dark.
“Fucknows.” Spider
offered unhelpfully, and Roger's shrug went unseen in the darkness at the back
of the shelter bay.
A few
months ago they would all have been greatly embarrassed at not knowing the name
of one of their unit who had been killed, but that was then and this was now.
“He was a new guy…and we
are down to six boxes of mixed link.”
“And smoke!” Spider
reminded him.
The CSM could be heard calling
out to the Q Bloke at the other end but the company’s quarter master sergeant’s
reply was a mere nod. He was a busy man this day.
Dopey hung up the old
fashioned handset and sat beside Spider on empty ammunition boxes in the
entrance to the shelter bay, their boots squelching in the mud with each movement
as the boxes of 7.62 ball ammunition were opened.
They were all deathly
tired, and not just from lack of sleep. Fear produces adrenaline and adrenaline
has a toll on the body but they squatted, silently creating fresh belts using
spent links. There would be no tracer rounds in these belts so they would be
carefully stored in the boxes the rounds had come from and placed with similar
belts as their final ammunition reserve.
“Anyone got any scoff?”
Spider asked “Me stomach thinks me throats been cut.”
Dopey fished out a small tin
from a cardboard ten man ration pack beside him, tossing it across.
Spider worked his compo
tin opener industriously in the dark interior of the shelter bay before giving
the contents an exploratory sniff.
“Bacon Grill! What kind
of grub is that for a good Jewish boy?” he grumbled “Hasn’t this man’s army
heard of religious diversity?”
“Did you wash this
morning, Spider?”
“Yes.”
“Was it army issue soap,
nicked from the bogs at Paderborn when we passed through?”
“Yes.”
“Then the answer is no, it
doesn’t give a stuff about rigorous debauchery because it was so old you were
probably washing with your granny.”
Spider tried to feign
offence at the remark, but he failed and joined the other two soldiers giggling
like demented schoolboys at the bad, and very old joke, before bending the
newly removed lid of the tin slightly and using it to scoop the contents into
his mouth, taking care not let his tongue touch its jagged edge.
Roger fished the gas
parts from out of the compo tin and grunted in pain as the rust remover
attacked the tiny cuts on his fingertips that seem to appear as if by magic on infantrymen’s
hands as soon as they get into the field. Roger’s discomfort was a minor thing,
akin to getting lemon juice on a cut and the reassembly and reattachment of the
gas regulator to the barrel went in silence.
The newly field cleaned
barrel replaced the old one, and a brief hiss sounded from the shermouli container
that one was doused too.
The white noise issuing
from the radio headphones cut out abruptly.
“Hello Four Six Delta this is Nine Four Bravo, over?”
The trio paused in what
they were doing.
“Four Six Bravo, send,
over.” replied Dopey.
“Nine Four Bravo…shoot Dee Eff Three Six Echo, over!”
“Here we go again.”
muttered Roger.
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